Good game. The controls were solid, which is the most important part for a platformer. My only suggestion would be to add invincibility frames and an option to turn music off
I liked the game. The controls worked good. And it was a nice artstyle. Only next time I would like it if you would add an option to turn of the sound.
First off my controls are not locked so the page moves up and down and second of all the graphics look like a kid drew it in MS paint. But the platforming isnt bad
Art:
Do I have to say something about the art… the animations are awfull! And why does the player not flip? Then the hearts are a bit bright, a more red-ish tone would be better. You can definitively improve here!
Audio:
The soundeffects are really good but the music is annoying, mostly because it restarts every time you enter the next level or you die.
Gameplay:
The controls are a bit… * meh* Anyway mostly it’s smooth, maybe a bit to smooth at some times. Collisions are fine.
Polishing:
Post processing or a few effects(I think thats how it’s called in Construct), then screen shake particles could help to let it look polished
Originality:
It’s a simple default platformer, so nothing special.
Then I’ll give you a few tutorials that helped me for good game feel and etc.
Art and animations:
And music:
And These about polish and game feel:
Hope I can help you improve.
Can you play and rate my game too?
Don't beat yourself up, it doesn't suck and like Mehcro said, you at least made one and dared to submit it for the whole of itch.io to see and evaluate.
I do agree with some of the feedback here, it is very unpolished still and feels unfinished. So perhaps you made some bad choices here and there, but the platforming itself works quite well. It plays fluently, gravity feels ok, so playability is quite ok.
I would say it's a very good start! Don't let negative feedback put you down, but take it as lessons and improve the next time!
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Everyone! i am making a remastered version of this game!
hey dude, long time no see :)). btw am I allowed to remaster your remaster?
Wow this is a load of fun
did you know that your game is in the popular section of web games on itch?
WHAT THE FUDGE
Epik
spikes insta-kill you, and the game scrolls up and down when i jump or press down, but other than that great game!
If You Fall, There Is No End, Also, Extend The Background, Other Than That, The Game Is Amazing!
NICE
ikr
oh.
WOW so fun!
This game is cool and Work without any Problem i have hours of Funny And Hard Gameplay (some times)
This game has cool and creative levels
it's a nice game
Good game. The controls were solid, which is the most important part for a platformer. My only suggestion would be to add invincibility frames and an option to turn music off
I liked the game. The controls worked good. And it was a nice artstyle. Only next time I would like it if you would add an option to turn of the sound.
Here is my feedback :)
I said "the game was" but i meant "the theme was"
thanks!!!
I WIN
this sucks
you can't commit suicide >:(
I win !!!!
This is cool :D
this sucks
First off my controls are not locked so the page moves up and down and second of all the graphics look like a kid drew it in MS paint. But the platforming isnt bad
this game pretty overated!
-khatzumoto
Can you just put it in full screen?
decent game, i enjoyed playing but it is a jam game made by a single person so...
Who wants to email me ar847294r@gmail.com
I’ve to say a lot so I’ll make a list:
Idea: How does it fit into the theme?
Art: Do I have to say something about the art… the animations are awfull! And why does the player not flip? Then the hearts are a bit bright, a more red-ish tone would be better. You can definitively improve here!
Audio: The soundeffects are really good but the music is annoying, mostly because it restarts every time you enter the next level or you die.
Gameplay: The controls are a bit… * meh* Anyway mostly it’s smooth, maybe a bit to smooth at some times. Collisions are fine.
Polishing: Post processing or a few effects(I think thats how it’s called in Construct), then screen shake particles could help to let it look polished
Originality: It’s a simple default platformer, so nothing special.
Then I’ll give you a few tutorials that helped me for good game feel and etc.
Art and animations:
And music:
And These about polish and game feel:
Hope I can help you improve. Can you play and rate my game too?
i think i might die of embarassment due to this dang it my game sucks
hey atleast you made one
Don't beat yourself up, it doesn't suck and like Mehcro said, you at least made one and dared to submit it for the whole of itch.io to see and evaluate.
I do agree with some of the feedback here, it is very unpolished still and feels unfinished. So perhaps you made some bad choices here and there, but the platforming itself works quite well. It plays fluently, gravity feels ok, so playability is quite ok.
I would say it's a very good start! Don't let negative feedback put you down, but take it as lessons and improve the next time!
Pretty neat game, but the controls, audio, and graphics can be massively improved.
yeah I agree on everything but controls, I have no clue on how to improve controls
This is thicc man